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Looks amazing, how did you do the white outline?

Hope this helped you deal with your feelings, sadness can really get in the way of drawing sometimes...

AkiCarlito responds:

i did the white outline with a white gel pen.
the paper itself was a light grey so it helped show the white ink.

yeah it helped a little

Great work as usual, the one thing that bothers me though is that her eyes look very slightly out of place, i cant quite say which one, when i cover one of them the other looks fine, but when i look at both it seems to me as if they're not perfectly lined with each other. Maybe it's just me.

I feel like this is an improvement from the rest of your work, girl looks a bit plasticky though, maybe choosing a darker color for those highlights (a lighter tone of blue instead of pure white) or blending the highlights would help. Do you consider blending the colors instead of cell-shading? I think the results could look quite good.

Keep it up, mate!

bocodamondo responds:

i allways do sharp shading in flash. and more realistic-like blurry shading in photoshop

AmaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaazing!

I just can't get over the fact of how incredibly small her head and arms are compared to the rest of her body, it's well drawn and colored, but the proportions are just really, really weird. And by that I don't mean the size her boobs are, I'm ok with artists going overboard on breast size as long as they keep it consistent with the rest of the drawing.
If you look at everything that is located under the breasts (and the breasts themselves), it looks consistent, however, when you look at the size of her upper body compared to the rest, it looks really small and out of proportion.

I give this 2.5 stars because the coloring and shading looks really good, and I congratulate you on that. The body is well drawn (linework and all that jazz), but the proportions really kill this drawing for me.

Keep it up though, I like your other drawings.

Why so blurry?

With a mouse?! Good grief, you are a patient man.

Also Umbrella ftw.

GumDisease responds:

Haha yea, it took quite a while.

Woo Umbrella! \o/ (even tho I'm not that big a fan, she just seemed like the easiest to draw... *coughs*)

What is ''very sketchy'' about this exactly?

Looks very good! Her dress-thing looks a bit dull to me(in color, I mean), but that might be just because, as you said, this is a quick concept.

AkiCarlito responds:

the lines xD
i didnt take as much time on the linework as i usually would for pieces like this.

i tend to use really large canvases and focus on very small details lol so i cant handle if the lines are not equal etc

You're doing fine.

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