Sr-Estroncio's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hey Arnold!]

Man, I don't understand, what is with these low scores? I like this drawing, the only problem I have with it is that helga's stomach doesn't seems to connect to her chest, I mean, her upper body looks great, and the lower part does too, but they don't seem to connect very well... I don't really know how to explain, I hope you understand what i mean. Other than that though, great work!

ShogunTanuki responds:

yeah, i know what you say, my error xDu, thanks for the review

[Dragon Crown's Sorcoress]

The upper part of her body is well drawn, but the lower part of her left leg looks very thick compared to her thigh and her other leg (which looks fine).
Also, I don't mean to nitpick, but the highlights on her chest and shoulders look a bit out of place, you see, there aren't many highlights on the rest of her body, so it looks a little bit inconsistent, as if her torso was made of a different material than the rest of her body (although I guess those boobs could actually be made of plastic, lol).

Overall, great work, keep it up, mate.

bocodamondo responds:

well maybe you are right. but since this character breasts are soo big, i had to do the lighting on them, they would look so bland without it

[Lilith Aensland]

This is awesome, both the linework and painting are great, but what really makes it special for me is the brilliant job you did with the lighting. I particularly enjoy how you painted her eyes.
However, her hand seems a little...broken? The way her fingers fold seems unnatural to me, maybe it's because her fingers don't arch back as you would expect them to, they just fold once at their base and then go in straight line.

Anyways, I'm still giving this 5 stars because everything else is just so great, awesome work, man!

Mahjix responds:

Thanks for your input! I tried playing around with the hand a bit and ended up liking the idea of her sort of pressing her fingers against the lightbox. I guess the idea could have been translated a bit better since I'm getting quite a few crits on it. Live and learn! Hopefully the next one will be better! ;}

[Demon Queen]

Hail to the king, baby!

Your linework is amazing and I absolutely love your coloring, very nice work!

MagicalNekoLenLen responds:

thanks :3