I have to say, as much as I digged your style, my thoughts during the biggest part of this video were '' WHAT IS HAPPENING?!''.
Seriously man, you gotta improve on your composition, make your storyboards clearer, define what each of the frames mean as a means of storytelling. I know you meant to match some transitions to the rythim of the song, but when most scenes are in the screen for the same amount of time (usually too quick to even register), it's really hard telling apart the most important scenes from the least important ones. This is most apparent during the first 30 seconds, which are incredibly hard to understand, The important shots that tell something about the characters (the astronaut dad, the failed exam, etc) simply flash by the screen, not given any time to adquire any meaning, and the non important shots stay in screen for exactly the same time, not informing the viewer on what he should be paying attention to, that was a pretty awful way to establish the characters and story, and when fighting started I had no idea why any of it was happening.
Keep animating, there is potential here, but you gotta improve your composition and timing if you want to make cartoons that tell a comprehensible story.
Jesus, the animation on this is amazing. Great voice acting too, great job to all of you.
Oh lord, this is so wrong! Hahahahahaha
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